My story is about the 3 little pigs
this week room 7 had been learning on how to write a story in your own words and here is mine hope you like it . if you want to comment on my work i just want you to know that thank you for comment By Destiny.
Hi Destiny, wow! your story is amazing! Well done. Great work for retelling the story of the three little pigs in your own words. I love how you have also included the story images in sequence. Your next steps will be to make sure that you preview your image before putting in blog as your image is slightly too big and off the page. Also make sure that you include a WALT. Keep up the hard work! Ka Pai!
Hi Destiny, wow! your story is amazing! Well done. Great work for retelling the story of the three little pigs in your own words. I love how you have also included the story images in sequence. Your next steps will be to make sure that you preview your image before putting in blog as your image is slightly too big and off the page. Also make sure that you include a WALT. Keep up the hard work! Ka Pai!
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