Hi Destiny, i like the way you used similes and adjectives and verbs.I like the way you describe the sun really well.The best thing is that you said that the sun is a radiant fireball just like ours.Maybe next time you should delete the word 3 adjectives , 1 simile and others that you don't need
Hi Destiny,
ReplyDeletei like the way you used similes and adjectives and verbs.I like the way you describe the sun really well.The best thing is that you said that the sun is a radiant fireball just like ours.Maybe next time you should delete the word 3 adjectives , 1 simile and others that you don't need